dust

by Andy Curtis

(actual dust particles)

I  saw some dust
And it was just
In front of me
For all to see.

I saw some dust
Or was it rust?
It was quite small
Hard to see at all.

I saw some dust
I had it sussed.
It’s gone today
I blew it away.

I still hold fast
To recent past.
I think I’m bust.
I miss my dust.

Comments

[Mark Todhunter]

Not bad Andy, but I think I could do just as well if not better, why dont you put one of my poems up that I e-mailed you?
Perhaps "teeth litter and a bus" or the ridiculous "danger ham"??

Cheers

[melina kanakaredes]

by Andy Curtis <-- Great!

[Brisbane Property Investment]

by Andy Curtis<-- :)) Nice and Great!